This short piece of fiction is part of a challenge put together by fellow blogger Frank from AFrankAngle – Check his post out!
Here is mine.
Footprints in the Sand
The sun rose slowly in the horizon, its rays gradually strengthening to the music of waves crashing on the shore. Loud, then soft, then loud again, as the tide pulled the frothy waters away from the ascending sand-dunes, only for it to come scrambling back up again, reaching foamy fingers higher up the dunes each time.
The beach was empty, save for a few gulls calling dismally as their soft bodies were buffeted by the winds high in the sky.
The remains of yesterday were completely wiped away by the tides. It was fresh and new as though someone had washed the world and removed all human traces from the sand. No sandcastles, no left-behind toys, and all conversations that wafted on the gentle sea breeze had long been snatched away, sailing far over the seas to distant lands.
No, the beach was fresh this morning. Ready for a new horde of laughter and life. Lively in anticipation, bringing rose-tinted blue skies and soft, pillowy clouds scudding across as though in a hurry to be gone before the sun had completely reclaimed her power.
The beach was empty, for now, in these blissful early morning hours. The beach was empty, and restful, yet oddly restless.
The beach was empty, and yet a set of footprints made their way solidly across the dry sand just inches away from the water, pattering, forming, collapsing in on themselves all along the beach line and into the brightness in the distance, and there was nobody there to make the mark.
You have captured many elements of a peaceful morning on the beach as sunrise approaches … well, at least that’s where my mind went. 🙂
Thanks for participating … and your Pingback appears on my page because of your link. It doesn’t show up immediately because they are held pending my approval (helping limit the spammers).
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Thank you, Frank. And thank you for this challenge, I have never written something based on a picture before, it’s a good practise in writing. I am glad the ping back worked – I thought there was a special complicated process haha I didn’t know it was as simple as linking another blog! 🙂
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if you like doing that, there is a group called Friday Fictioneers …. each week they write a 100-word story based on an image. No obligation to do it every week. Here’s an example from blogger friend Dale. https://adelectablelife.com/2017/07/05/hamster-wheel-friday-fictioneers/
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That was absolutely beautiful – way more than 150 words, but beautiful! 😉
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Thank you, Dale 🙂 and thank you for reading! 🙂
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A beautiful expression of a quiet beach morning. Lovely,
Isadora 😎
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Thank you very much, Isadora! And thank you for stopping by to have a read 🙂
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Thank you & well done!
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Thank you for stopping by! 🙂
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